Original Poetry - Love Series: Love's Unscheduled Visit
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Original Poetry from Adan Lerma
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Artist's Comment: an early working title, "love struck" didn't quite fit the sense i wanted to express, the almost subtle yet brick hard impact of falling in love
the progressive shift from faint promising recognition of what might be, to secured locked-in knowledge of having one's heart penetrated, possibly permanently, without warning, seemed more... "unscheduled" :-)
like another poem posted this week, "magic", i added text, though this time more substantially, essentially, gutting the second half and creating a newer work from that gutted half to be posted next week, "digital love"
the earlier work had tried to combine too much of two themes; i don't consider having two themes some kind of sacred no-no, the poem just plain didn't work for me anymore :-)
i should add i hear the same in regard to multiple point-of-views in a visual work of art; certainly one strong sustained point of view can be very satisfying, yet the impressionists prided themselves in their early work of having more than one focal point; the question is: can you pull it off?
sometimes you just won't know til you try :-)
related: "when i see you"
adan - february 2, 2008 - to "love's unscheduled visit"
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Posted by Adan Lerma on 2/2/2008 10:14:57 AM |
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